I thought this Discriptive Essay will give me a B at least (Junting) There is an ancient story that goes as follows:

A man who was the fittest of all time had won every running competition there was to win. One day, he woke up asking himself whether he could ever run faster than the sun. Failing countless times, he gave up and started pampering(*) his stomach. This went on and he became obese, envious of people around him, he could never be who he was again

This story encapsulates the importance of keeping fit. It is a pleasure and an honor to keep fit. There is a no need to look at other people and be envious of them because we, will be the cause of people looking at us. I will be the center of attraction and girls will be queuing up to go on a date with me.

From the ancient story, we can understand that running has been a form of exercise even in the ancient days. Until today, running is still among the few popular exercises existing in the modern era. Running is arguably the only few sports which enable us to perspire the most. It is my hobby to go on marathons, to look at beautiful scenery and at the same time, gain inspiration from them. Running enables people to look at the macho side of us and at the same time we are able to keep fit. Won't this be killing two birds with one stone?

Another way to keep fit is adopting a sport as a hobby. Now, in the modern world, soccer is one of the more popular sports. People like Cristiano Ronaldo, David Beckham are drawing the plaudits and we cannot help but to 'worship' them like idols. Soccer involves a lot of running and together with a passion and spirit in an individual, it can being out a professional player. Soccer is a team game and never a one man show. This sport as said involves running up and down a field allowing us to keep fit easily.

These fitness sessions we talk about are of importance because through them we can not only keep fit but also gain a level of discipline. Going to exercise is not a simple task. It needs the cultivation of essential discipline in us.

Finally, keeping fit is not just about running and playing soccer. Other sports and exercise are equally good and it is up to individuals to realise their own passion. However, how much exercise we do will go down the drain as long as we do not keep a healthy diet

Therefore, It is time to go out there and exercise!

"Fit and trim, dominates the world?"

14/30
Organized fluent but can be better(Teacher Comment)

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By the way, you know why i highlighted the word plaudits? Because it made the teacher check the dictionary because he didn't know what the word meant!